<p>Today I wrote this poem,<br />but I’m not sure if it’s good.<br />It doesn’t have the things<br />my teacher says a poem should.<br /><br />It doesn’t share the feelings<br />I have deep inside of me.<br />It hasn’t any metaphors<br />and not one simile.<br /><br />It’s missing any narrative.<br />Alliteration too.<br />It isn’t an acrostic,<br />diamante, or haiku.<br /><br />There’s nothing that’s personified.<br />It doesn’t have a plot.<br />I’m pretty sure that rhyming<br />is the only thing it’s got.<br /><br />It sure was fun to write it,<br />and I think it’s long enough.<br />It’s just too bad it’s missing<br />all that great poetic stuff.<br /><br />I put it on my teacher’s desk<br />and, wow, she made a fuss.<br />She handed back my poem<br />with an A++++!<br /></p>
<p>Today I wrote this poem,<br />but I’m not sure if it’s good.<br />It doesn’t have the things<br />my teacher says a poem should.<br /><br />It doesn’t share the feelings<br />I have deep inside of me.<br />It hasn’t any metaphors<br />and not one simile.<br /><br />It’s missing any narrative.<br />Alliteration too.<br />It isn’t an acrostic,<br />diamante, or haiku.<br /><br />There’s nothing that’s personified.<br />It doesn’t have a plot.<br />I’m pretty sure that rhyming<br />is the only thing it’s got.<br /><br />It sure was fun to write it,<br />and I think it’s long enough.<br />It’s just too bad it’s missing<br />all that great poetic stuff.<br /><br />I put it on my teacher’s desk<br />and, wow, she made a fuss.<br />She handed back my poem<br />with an A++++!<br /></p>